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 Post subject: Fools Rush In-Part 11
PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2010 12:05 pm 
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Boy, What a *******! Actually, that's too mild for Alex. Very good!!

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 Post subject: Re: Fools Rush In-Part 11
PostPosted: Fri Sep 03, 2010 3:42 pm 
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Thank you, Karen. :)

Yeah, he's a horrible man, and yes, that word is a bit mild for him. :lol:

There's more to come, hopefully in a day or so.


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 Post subject: Re: Fools Rush In-Part 11
PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2012 3:26 pm 
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Is there a part 12?? Im in suspense here, waiting for the "Hunter swoops in and save :) s McCall" moment!


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 Post subject: Re: Fools Rush In-Part 11
PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2012 3:28 pm 
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Sorry, I meant part13....


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 Post subject: Re: Fools Rush In-Part 11
PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2012 8:36 pm 
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Thanks for reading. I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far. :)

A part thirteen? There are about forty parts and it's still unfinished. It's really gotten out of hand over the years. :lol: I started writing this story about ten years ago. :oops:

When people stopped dropping by, I lost interest in posting additional parts. I actually decided to write the story over and to try and shorten it and make it less overwhelming.

I could add more here, but when I'm able to, I'll be making some major changes and will add the updated version to fanfiction.net. Not sure when, though.

Since someone is interested, I feel more like working on it. :)

In the meantime, you can take a glance at my work on fanfiction.net, if you like. My username is LM5657.

My stories - -

Dream Date: A Valentine Story
To Breathe Again
To Breathe Again: A Second Wind (in progress)

Stories I've co-written - -

Illusions of Security
When Evil Comes Home
(These stories were posted under the ff.net account of my good friend, BJC525.)


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 Post subject: Re: Fools Rush In-Part 11
PostPosted: Fri Apr 27, 2012 7:02 am 
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Grat thanks! I just read part 13 and now I'm looking for the rest! Hahaha!! Great job!


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 Post subject: Re: Fools Rush In-Part 11
PostPosted: Fri Apr 27, 2012 11:57 am 
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:lol:

Thanks!

I'd hate to keep adding more of the version that needs major work, but I also hate to keep you waiting. What'll I do?! What'll I do?!
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 27, 2012 7:04 pm 
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Haha! It's ok! Although I'm dying!!!!!! Lol!!!! Maybe I'll be inspired to write one! :)


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I can troll around the ff site in the meantime. ;)


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 Post subject: Re: Fools Rush In-Part 11
PostPosted: Sat Apr 28, 2012 5:50 am 
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Try to hold off on dying! :lol:
I'm used to people being totally impatient with me about adding more chapters, so join the party if you want. :lol:

It makes me feel good to be of some part....even a teeeeeeny part of inspiring someone else to write. :D
I've been told by at least two others that I inspired them. :D
Best of luck with your fanfics if you go for it!

The main reason for a rewrite is that I have a bad habit of saying a lot in a story that really isn't needed. It just goes off the mark and ends up messy. I've learned a lot since this fic. Thankfully! :)

Once I put the edited version online, I guess you and any others will have to start over from part one.
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 Post subject: Re: Fools Rush In-Part 11
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I just read part 14!!!! :). Lovvvved the twist with the baby!!!! The whole time, I'm like "how in the world can she be having Alex's baby?! How is she ever gonna get back with Rick while carrying another man's baby!!! Lol! Great work! I'm excited for the rest of the story!

I'm still plugging away at mine. I have 12 pages lol!! I may release in parts like you did though. I just keep going back and revising it though! Hahah. I love this! So fun! :)


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 Post subject: Re: Fools Rush In-Part 11
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Thanks for taking time to do so. :)

I'm glad you enjoyed the twists. I love trying to add as many as possible. That's one of the reasons why the story is so long. :oops:

I'll be away from the computer for a couple of days, at least, but hope to get back to writing soon after. Last night, I added a bit more to To Breathe Again: A Second Wind. Fingers crossed that I can add more to both stories, plus another that could use some attention.

On a side note, you can feel free to post a new topic for each part you read. That way, if someone new comes along and wants to find what was previously said about "part five", they can find it and add to it. You guys may even end up discussing it. :lol:

Thanks again!


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ok, sounds good! Will do! :)


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